4th Cut - Humanoid

This is our 4th cut and on this one we have done some changes that solve some of the problems from the previous cut.

What we have done:

1. Trim the first scene shot and the music - make it a little shorter, and change the first typography text onto a black screen.
2. Made a couple of clips faster by a little - also to make the opening sequence shorter.
3. Reorder the titles to the correct order and change some of the font colours as some of it are not read-able.
4. Added the radio voice over and the other optional sound of the music coming out of the headphones to the opening sequence.

And the feedback that we've got was:

1. The first scene is still a little too long.
2. Radio man voice over sound doesn't sound right.
3. The title order is not right - the 'Humanoid' title still needs to come earlier.
4. The music stops too early (it stops before they take their headphones off).
5. The diegetic footsteps sound has a little dip when the shot changes; need minor adjustments.
6. 'Reaction shot' at the end doesn't look right and both of them reacted at a slightly different times.
7. The black screen after the fade transition is too long - just remove it completely.
8. Lastly, the last text at the end should be 'Directed By'.

This clip is so close to it being the final cut, but there are still number of problems / changes we need to do to this cut. We're planning on improving it to the next cut by adding something new to the clip to solve some of the problems and might need to do another recording for the voice.