Research and Planning

Wednesday, 4 January 2017

3rd Cut - Humanoid

This is our 3rd cut:


In our 3rd cut; we have put new clips in and lots of other changes to the opening sequence.

We have added:
  1. New shots at the beginning to make the opening longer.
  2. Added more music into it so it doesn't feel empty.
  3. The shot that fills the time gap when after they walked through the gate.
  4. Added non-diegetic sounds to the clips - where the clone's body gets turned around and when the clone opens its eyes - to give more tense to the scene.
  5. Also a text at the end to add something more to the opening - to create an enigma to the opening.

We then get another feedback from this one which was;
  1. The first shot was too long - it should never be longer than 5-6 secs <- max.
  2. Title 'HUMANOID' needs to come earlier.
  3. The order of the titles is wrong. Need to check the research task and put the titles in the right order.
After getting those feedbacks, we thought and have planned on re-doing some shots - especially the first scene in the house - add a couple more things, like the radio voice over into the opening and we'll improve it on our next cut.

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