This is our 1st cut:
For our 1st cut, this is good but there are improvements to make to make it better. These are the feedbacks we got:
- The duration of the opening is a little bit short, so it needs to be longer - 2 mins max.
- Maybe put on the music at the start so it doesn't feel too quiet and empty.
- The size of the text are too big; a slight change in size, maybe reduce it a little.
- The title 'HUMANOID' needs to come earlier in the opening.
- There is a gap that needs to be filled to make the continuity consistent after the boys walked in through the gate.
- Might need to slow down a couple of clips - when Michael turned the clone body and when the clone open its eyes - to make the opening not too rushed.
After we received those feedbacks, we came up with another idea to make the opening sequence longer and edits to enhance the quality; we tried to improve the changes on our 2nd cut.
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